It's very refreshing to see a good poet writing candidly about the act of love. Most mainstreams journals won't touch such poems. They are like the pariah of the mainstream poetry world. But you know and I know and all our friends here know that, like the act itself, poems such as this one totally enrich our lives because they remind us that the body is the temple of the spirit. Thank God for Substack!
So little time to hold ; even a second breath takes the energy of a run on a beach, with hands held then slip down the spine and turn, the clock’s key to the heart of one more click, one more infinite minute is all that’s needed.
It's very refreshing to see a good poet writing candidly about the act of love. Most mainstreams journals won't touch such poems. They are like the pariah of the mainstream poetry world. But you know and I know and all our friends here know that, like the act itself, poems such as this one totally enrich our lives because they remind us that the body is the temple of the spirit. Thank God for Substack!
Thank you so much, Martin!
Amen
Passion described in a simple but very accurate way. I believe you've managed to break it down into some of its elementary pieces
Thank you so much, Rolando!
Mmmm. Let me show this to the one next to me.
:)
Ha, good luck!
lol
: )
So little time to hold ; even a second breath takes the energy of a run on a beach, with hands held then slip down the spine and turn, the clock’s key to the heart of one more click, one more infinite minute is all that’s needed.
Thank you, Richard :)
Lovely😊😊😊
Thank you, Mr. Ma!!
A soft growl, and a ride that releases more endorphins than 10 runs put together.
I never read anybody who describes the act so well as you.
Effing awesome poetry in motion.
Thank you, Therese :)
...a rare day. Beautiful.
Thank you, Peter!
a very tender and visceral piece bringing the passion to life beautifully...
Thank you, Jaap!
“Soft growl into my skin” - delicious moments
Thank you kind sir
Passion.....
Thank you, Leon :)
Your poetry leaves me yearning for more! 🥹
Me Too!
Thank you so much, Judith ❤
Love this 🩵
Thank you, Grace!
Gorgeous poetry♥️
Thank you, Anne!! ❤
This was so fresh...succinct yet dripping with passion.
"When desire outweighs a struggle to be gentle"--loved this treasure.
Oooh, that gave me shivers.
Thank you, Mistress!