This is another incredibly powerful poem of love and loss. I can feel the dark intensity of those closing lines as the move from nearness and ecstasy to the stark opposite. Chillingly memorable, Rena!
I can feel all the tension in the air. When I was reading your poem, the image came to me of someone waiting at a train station for the arrival of the lover they haven't been with for some time. It's very beautiful
Thank you, Carina ❤🌻
So wow! 🥰
Thank you, dear Wifa 🌻😘
this has a beautifully intimate rhythm, like the slow jazz you evoke!
Thank you, Jaap 🎶🌻
This is another incredibly powerful poem of love and loss. I can feel the dark intensity of those closing lines as the move from nearness and ecstasy to the stark opposite. Chillingly memorable, Rena!
"And I feel you near
A sharp intake, a long low moan
Details of this damnable day
At this moment are gone."
Thank you, Martin 🌻
Whew…..!!
Thank you, Leon :) 🌻
I can feel all the tension in the air. When I was reading your poem, the image came to me of someone waiting at a train station for the arrival of the lover they haven't been with for some time. It's very beautiful
Thank you so much for the kind words, Rolando 🌻
Incredibly sensual and ultimately calming. I put away all other reading and end on this lovely note. 🎵
Ohhh thank you, Judith 🌻 high praise ❤ rest well
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Beautiful, powerful poem, Rena! Thanks so much!
Thank you so much, Michael :)🌻
Beautiful 💙
Thank you, Grace 🌻💙
Waves stroke silk sails
Sheer sheets of love still the best feeling in short caresses long days shoulder holds hours long nights.
Greek delta door still open let in time. It too will keep with door open.
Thank you, Richard :) 🌻
I don’t remember
The details
Neither
Clothes on
Clothes off
to the light
Of the moon
Thank you, David 🌻🌙 The light of the moon is the important part :)
yes my mother said they all look the same in the dark!!
Hot, slow, jazz indeed. Rich harmonies here, Rena...
Thank you, Jed 🌻🎶
So steamy! You always paint a gorgeous picture with your words...
And you're always so kind with yours. Thank you, Lyns 🌻
Love: "The world dissolves in a door jamb"
Thank you, Amanda 🌻 keeping it balanced 🙂