something very direct and unguarded about it that I like, rena. It feels emotionally sincere, almost like a quiet confession rather than a performance. Lines like ‘Departure is my expertise’ and ‘The bed still warm / Silence saves you’ really stayed with me. They have a stark, simple strength. It has a very spare, intimate tone.”
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Only love prevails.
feeling that today
So poignant and yet comforting at the same time
Was looking for the right words - Karin found them.
something very direct and unguarded about it that I like, rena. It feels emotionally sincere, almost like a quiet confession rather than a performance. Lines like ‘Departure is my expertise’ and ‘The bed still warm / Silence saves you’ really stayed with me. They have a stark, simple strength. It has a very spare, intimate tone.”
Hopeful! Love the way each verse weaves in to the next.
So very poignant!❤️🕊️🥰
The wreckage makes me hold you dearer...and perhaps you've grappled with illness? you capture how life changes us
Very poignant, and very powerful! 😎👍
My neighbors have chosen the enemy, as well.
Always so tender. Beautiful poem, Rena.
Very nice, Rena. I can relate to your words.
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A sad poem and so real. So easy to relate to in a way. Good morning Rena!